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Roman Quick's avatar

It’s impressive to write about imperfections and character development and still end it in a satisfying narrative way. Nice job

Lemonly (Emily)'s avatar

I feel as if our souls are running in the same direction and on parallel journeys. You speak straight to the psyche and pull it inside-out

renee's avatar

yes

Mujahid Ally's avatar

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Sonataa's avatar

this playful writing got me all hyped up, it's fun, it's entertaining, and most of all, it's very very human

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J.E. Petersen's avatar

Incredible/hilarious how useless our present-tense judgements concerning our own art. I've come to expect that I will be impressed by writing with which I was formerly embarrassed, and embarrassed by writing I was so sure was impressive while I was writing it. But not so consistently that it's even a useful metric. As in: whether I am embarrassed or impressed by what I'm currently writing seems to have no bearing on how my future self will regard the work.

Lewis Fisher's avatar

this made my evening savannah thank you

Javier is away's avatar

I hate feeling like this, but am bored without it.

anar's avatar

just so beautiful, i think you are very good at doing writing

Maxwell Conrad's avatar

"I resonated with this heavily. It's hard to be gentle with oneself in ones ruminations. Thanks for being honest